Mary Berrisford (our media teacher) gave us some very useful feedback and criticisms on our rough cut of the opening.
Things that needed changing:
- The name of our film opening
- The overall length of the opening
- The black material where the Polaroid photos are placed
- The length of the final lift scene
We edited all of these things and think the criticisms made our opening better, more concise and more understandable. The several extreme closeups made our opening seem very intricate and difficult (which it was).
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